



My journey with David began when he generously offered to review the first chapter of my manuscript. I assumed it would be the industry-standard quick gloss-over. Was I ever wrong. The chapter came back filled with meticulous notes, thoughtful ideas, highly detailed discussions, and deeply insightful comments.
As we continued working through the full manuscript, I was even more blown away by David’s professionalism and efficient approach. He seamlessly combines a 100,000-foot view of the entire story arc with a sharp focus on the tactical details that drive pacing, clarity, and reader engagement. And when needed, David didn’t shy away from kicking my literary butt into shape—demanding discipline, structure, and refusing to let me settle for easy, superficial solutions.
But beyond the professional, David is a true mentor and a remarkable human being. With emotional intelligence, he knows when to tread lightly and when to push hard, always relating to you as a person—not just to the words on the page. In this often-ominous journey of writing, editing, and publishing a novel, I’ve found a true ally.















I found ThEditors via a Tweet that mentioned their offer of a free assessment of the first few thousand words of your MS. At that time (April 2015), I’d been polishing the book over many years, and felt it was finally ready. In my mind, the assessment would be a quick check that it was indeed ready for publication.
That initial free assessment I received from ThEditors arrived sooner than I had expected, and the email explained several significant issues. Every point that Dave made, I saw excellent sense in; and each taught me something. The points were not obvious until they had been pointed out. At that point I decided I would indeed like to pay for a full assessment, after I had attended to all the points he had made. Dave and I exchanged some emails, during which he impressed me with both his honesty and his integrity. And a mention of an attachment made me wonder whether I might possibly have overlooked something in his original email assessment…
I certainly had! Dave had attached a fully-marked up copy of the sample of my MS, line by line, with many detailed comments. Which I had completely overlooked, because there was so much “meat” in his email. Feeling like an idiot, I then went back to my MS and made still more improvements.
The full assessment arrived at the time Dave had said to expect it, and was even more rigorous, thoughtful and helpful than the free sample assessment had been. To be a little more concrete, some of Dave’s suggestions were:
Dave has given me so much valuable and substantive feedback that I could never summarise it all here: just his Critique ran to over 9k words, for my 150k-word MS. In addition, he provided a detailed structurally-edited MS with something like a couple of thousand extremely helpful comments. You will not find a better editor.
But his biggest suggestion was that I had two books here! He thought the first half could make a great book in its own right (if I could flesh it out enough to make a good plot for it by itself). I reluctantly saw the wisdom in this, after thinking deeply and honestly about it, discussing it with Dave, and discussing it with my two key Beta readers. So I went ahead, and re-worked it, and then had Dave do a 2nd critique of the new 1st book. Dave was just as diligent, just as insightful, and just as helpful for this 2nd effort.
And lest you think that this is just my opinion, let me quote from a review on Amazon from someone who had seen and read most of the MS (via Amazon’s WriteOn writers workshop):
“Backstory/How I came to know about Wild Thing. Since I’m on a writing site, I do try to give feedback. Normally, though, I give feedback for the first chapter, but if the book is really good, I continue. I don’t continue reading most books that I read. But, Wild Thing was one of them, even though I never really finished it. I did read a fair bit before the author decided to use some professional editors.
And woah, the difference is amazing! This is probably not relevant to 99% of the people out there, but I really want to say, that the changes in this book are amazing. I liked it before, but now, it’s a lot more fleshed out, and the characters feel a lot deeper. It’s amazing to see the story that was hiding under that first draft I read.”
Enough said, I feel.
Thanks, Dave: I’m looking forward to working with you on the whole series!




